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my head swirls
from the intoxication
the poison
given to my weak body
my head swirls
as my nightmares turn into dreams
and dreams into reality
the earthquakes beneath me
my breathing slows
my heart rate increases
my entire being shudders at the feeling
my existence is mere imagination
i hear the sounds of the oppressed deep in my heart
i scream at the feeling of instant pain
racing through me
stop it! STOP IT!!
yelling at nothing
no one listens to my begs
my pleas
no one cares
so neither will I
at this exact moment i went crazy
slowly driven mad

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Can you tell how insane I feel?
Is the no breaks in the lines make the poem seem like too much?
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vadess40 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Ah, what's a little madness and/or mental instability? Sanity is boring, afterall!
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slurdWRDZofDRUKZ Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i agree sanity is normal and normal is... well normal
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vadess40 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
And boring! Thanks for the Llama!
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slurdWRDZofDRUKZ Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
EXACTLY and no problem
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Messed-Up-Jinx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aren't we all? :)
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slurdWRDZofDRUKZ Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yes i believe we are
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Messed-Up-Jinx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Mhm
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